Its ok the way it is but you must be wanting to improve on it or you wouldn't have asked. Feel free to take or leave these comments as you see fit and everybody is different but this is what I saw;
o little black letters on a washed out white background
it was hard on my eyes and hard for me to read. I prefer the house curtains design approach. This is where you use a set of complementary colors, preferablly ones that complement your car color and build a theme design set. for example, medium dark blue letters on a pale blue or baby blue background would take down the background light builb effect and should make it easier to read. you can use other colors with that car too such as shades of grey to silver which I think of as the chrome and metal decor, LOL.
o gratutious use of the words Boss 351
if its not going to have a Boss 351 engine and be built to something approaching a Boss 351 spec then I would pick a more appropriate name. HIPO is just as bad. if its not a real hipo don't call it one. GT, Cobra, Mach, bla bla, all the same.
o TMI (too much info)
you have book thinking which is fine for some things but most web pages are more like trying to keep the attention span of an ADHD on ritilin. for web pages think slide show or a commercial(few seconds, nice, clear attenion grabbing pic and on to the next one).
o theres too many small link pics most of which nobody will probably ever click to see larger images. the larger images aren't all that clear. the pics need a photographers make over. sets of smaller pics can be made into animated GIF slide shows with each image flashing on the screen for a few seconds.
o since the pics should be pretty much self explanatory then the text should be brief
o if a specific subject is much longer than a screen or 2 you will loose your audience, the ADHD effect again.
I hope all this helped some and no I don't practice what I preach on my own page either, LOL. well I try too sometimes. I'm doing some animated GIF pic shows for it but finding enough time is difficult.
You can see my 65 fastback at:
http://hottarod.stangnet.com/
http://members.aol.com/macstang/Gifs/macstang6.jpg
